Results from feedback

The feedback was generally positive but there wer a couple of issues such as the quality although that is beyond our control. Other things to improve are:

• The lighting; it was too dark in various shots
• The sound; Richard is difficult to hear
• The chase sequence needs to be extended and more dramatic
• The narrative needs to be a bit stronger

To improve these issues we will re shoot it with a better quality DSLR camera (Canon EOS 600D). This will allow us to control the exposure and lighting more and also make the film look more cinematic as we can change the colour settings and resolution.

"WAYWARD" - First Edit

Shot list

1. Establishing wide shot
2. Two-shot
3. Over-the-shoulder
4. Over-the-shoulder
5. Over-the-shoulder
6. Establishing wide shot
7. Point-of-view
8. Point-of-view
9. Establishing wide shot
10. High angle close-up
11. Mid-shot
12. Wide shot
13. Over-the-shoulder
14. Medium close-up
15. Over-the-shoulder
16. Over-the-shoulder
17. Over-the-shoulder
18. Wide shot
19. Point-of-view
20. Point-of-view
21. Over-the-shoulder
22. Over-the-shoulder
23. Over-the-shoulder
24. Over-the-shoulder
25. Over-the-shoulder
26. Over-the-shoulder
27. Point-of-view
28. Extreme close-up
29. Close-up
30. Medium close-up
31. Over-the-shoulder
32. Wide shot
33. Point-of-view
34. Point-of-view
35. Wide shot
36. Point-of-view
37. Low angle point-of-view
38. Eye-line match
39. Point-of-view

"Wayward" Rough storyboard

"Wayward" Screenplay

Wayward Screenplay PDF

Editing log

Dark filters will be added in post-production to make the film look darker

Location Recce

Location - 
Beverley Westwood
Bricknell Avenue

Lighting -
We will be using natural light

Camera Angles -
To film high angle shots we will have to climb in a tree or use step ladders

Sound - 
Due to the location being open, it is subject to high winds so the sound will be very bad. To get around this problem we will have to dub some of the sounds

Health and Safety issues -
Climbing trees to achieve high angle shots
The needles and knife will have to be monitored closely as they can cause unwanted attention as well as minor and major injuries should anything go wrong